However, a few areas where you can improve this and push it up to a solid/high A:
Iconography - this is a little bit off the mark. What you talk about is more in-line with 'themes'. Think about signs and symbols - wine glasses/roses/nice cars/dresses...or whatever.
Your Todorov sections would benefit from actual examples from the films you analyse. For example, WHAT is the disruption in Friends with Benefits?
Have pics for all areas (i.e. you have none for Themes)
Friends with Benefits section could do with more images to support.
Propp section is nice - but name the films underneath each pic.
In your conclusion, actually name/list the conventions of Rom-Coms. E.g:
- Linear narrative - Attraactive young actors - certain props/locations/clothes...etc, etc
This is a low level 4 (A-) but I really want to get solid A's from you - especially as it's your target now!!!
Another good piece of work.
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However, a few areas where you can improve this and push it up to a solid/high A:
Iconography - this is a little bit off the mark. What you talk about is more in-line with 'themes'. Think about signs and symbols - wine glasses/roses/nice cars/dresses...or whatever.
Your Todorov sections would benefit from actual examples from the films you analyse. For example, WHAT is the disruption in Friends with Benefits?
Have pics for all areas (i.e. you have none for Themes)
Friends with Benefits section could do with more images to support.
Propp section is nice - but name the films underneath each pic.
In your conclusion, actually name/list the conventions of Rom-Coms. E.g:
- Linear narrative
- Attraactive young actors
- certain props/locations/clothes...etc, etc
This is a low level 4 (A-) but I really want to get solid A's from you - especially as it's your target now!!!
Well done on all your hard work